Originally posted by F14战斗鸡 at 2005-8-23 14:03:
在靠近平原的浅丛林中,一头大野狼捉到一只兔子。大野狼把兔子带回山洞,兔子想:这下我完了,我的一生就要结束了。
但是在山洞里,大野狼没有吃掉兔子,他要求兔子跟他做爱。
“我不打算吃掉你,但是你必 ...
Originally posted by charmingxie at 2005-8-23 21:45:
............还不就是那样……不过改成两只动物,其实就是动物
Originally posted by charmingxie at 2005-8-23 09:59 PM:
……删掉删掉……我怎么删不掉…………
Originally posted by 托洛茨基 at 2005-8-23 23:01:
剔掉了。。pig.gif
Originally posted by 大尾巴郎 at 2005-8-24 01:29 PM:
故事的结尾不好!
兔子被狼反复操了以后,由最初的恐惧,愤恨,到了无可奈何,怀疑,最后产生了瞬间的怜爱,禁不住问大灰狼,此时此刻你爱我吗?
大灰狼迟疑半晌,然后坚定的回答:“爱”,并立刻起 ...
Originally posted by CSU_chen at 2005-8-24 07:30:
文风像足了我前GF!!!
但我前GF是只兔子.她喜欢女人.
Originally posted by Fatimah at 2005-8-24 07:31 AM:
我也喜欢喜欢女人的兔子...
Originally posted by CSU_chen at 2005-8-24 07:34:
抱歉!刚才说错了!我前GF是喜欢兔子的女人!
Originally posted by 右翼反日分子 at 2005-8-24 07:02 AM:
多余的结尾啊...
虽然增加了字数,但是减少了可想象力度...
Originally posted by 慵懒的猫 at 2005-8-24 10:42 AM:
偶觉得结果弄出爱情,简直是败笔
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 2005-8-24 11:58 AM:
那弄出啥来比较好?
Originally posted by 大尾巴郎 at 2005-8-24 12:01:
那就再改.
当小白兔煽情的提问后,大灰狼说,我从网上看水帖得知,做爱最消耗体力,而且有助于消化,现在我饿了....
不管怎么样,要把那只兔子吃了.要不然,我老觉得不过瘾man.gif
Originally posted by 沙洲 at 2005-8-24 12:05 PM:
让他们同是徇情如何? 跌落山崖...
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 2005-8-24 11:05 AM:
更恶了。
你会跟你的食品ML么fear.gif
Originally posted by 慵懒的猫 at 2005-8-24 11:07 AM:
兔子谋杀了大灰狼,然后远走他乡自由的生活wink.gif
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 2005-8-24 11:08 AM:
故事虽然讲的一般。
但是细节,即内心刻画还是不错。
读后让人感同身受。
我们更愿意认为本文是对现实生活的一种反思。
Originally posted by 大尾巴郎 at 2005-8-24 12:15 PM:
那就改成,兔子煽情的提问后,大灰狼一时发呆,不知道怎么回答好.小白兔,补充说其实她已经得了禽流感.大灰狼后悔的心脏崩裂,小白兔快乐的继续去山里找萝卜去了.......
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 2005-8-24 11:17:
干脆直接这么问:请问,你可不可以做我的胡萝卜?
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 2005-8-24 11:17 AM:
干脆直接这么问:请问,你可不可以做我的胡萝卜?
Originally posted by 沙洲 at 2005-8-24 11:05 AM:
让他们同是徇情如何? 跌落山崖...
Originally posted by 青山 at 2005-8-24 11:23 AM:
调和主义, 没劲。
小白兔应该去找狮子王告状,让狮子王再 XX 大灰狼一次,来个小白兔复仇机。 复仇后舍身饲狮就行了。
壮烈吧?
Originally posted by Fatimah at 2005-8-24 11:25 AM:
小白兔最后应该说"完了没有? 现在你到前面去, 轮到我了..."
Originally posted by 大尾巴郎 at 2005-8-24 11:29:
兔靠狼,能行吗.是不是我们要把狼先拴住了呀,what.gif
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 2005-8-24 11:05 AM:
更恶了。
你会跟你的食品ML么fear.gif
Originally posted by 大尾巴郎 at 2005-8-24 11:36 AM:
你以为那,多少像我这样的年轻人买猪肉光是为了吃呀tired.gif
Originally posted by wayway2000 at 24/8/2005 11:05:
更恶了。
你会跟你的食品ML么fear.gif
Originally posted by lik at 2005-8-24 14:48:
苹果派撒!
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