轻轻的我走了,不带走一片云彩
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Originally posted by 青山 at 2005-8-12 12:21 AM:



不要居高临下, 我觉得写得挺真实的, 鼓励rose.gif


感觉写的太阴暗,让人觉有似乎有点刻意在里面

[ Last edited by 慵懒的猫 on 2005-8-12 at 00:28 ]
轻轻的我走了,不带走一片云彩

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