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Originally posted by 千寻 at 2004-5-13 04:18 PM: 这个好像不合七律,作古风好些。:) 诗里面春意盎然 ;)
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Originally posted by 流忆的窗棂 at 2004-5-13 05:14 PM: 好一片春光,虽不合律,却也和音。14.gif14.gif
Originally posted by 青山 at 2004-5-14 04:04 PM: 犯字不好听 是七捋